sharp cheese / I sometimes / feel trapped

I first came across Peggy's cheese-ku in our haiku-kai in February 2010. I started several small email-based kukai a little over a decade ago. The first one, the one I still participate in occasionally, includes several editors. Peggy was one of the founding members. Peggy and I also wrote renku together back then too, won a few prizes together and shared so many more jokes and smiles.

Anyway, I love this haiku. Here’s my response from the haiku-kai, before I knew Peggy was the author:

I grinned. I shook my head and said that’s not right. That’s not haiku.

Then I felt trapped — it is haiku, wondrously farcical haiku. Sure, there's no kigo, but I can look past it for haiku like this. One like my old pet example

while I clean my ears with a matchstick it’s darkening

So I gave in and praised this haiku. Then I went downstairs and ate some cheese. Mmmm. Thanks.

Kuniharu Shimizu, our first artist-in-residence a decade ago, graciously allowed haijinx to reprint haiga from see haiku here.

haijinx
volume IV, issue 1
March 2011

entrée

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acknowledgements
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haijinx IV:1 (March 2011)

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